Talk:SL95/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 01:08, 20 November 2009 (UTC) Comments: I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 01:08, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The sentence "They can be found on lines 13, 17, 18 and sometimes 19." sounds awkward.
 * 2) "1995-order" should not be hyphenated.
 * 3) In the sentence "It has 100% low-floor, is 2.65 metres (8 ft 8 in) wide and also had outward-opening doors.", the tense needs to agree.
 * 4) "one trams was delivered that would satisfy all the criteria." sounds awkward.
 * 5) The sentence "1 November 2002 was the last day with SM91 in service. By then, 27 of the SL95-trams had been delivered, and Oslo Sporveier was able to operate its entire network with only articulated trams" should not begin with a numeral.
 * 6) The sentence "These upgrades were planned completed by 2009." sounds awkward.
 * 7) The sentences "There are 88 seats, of which 64 are on the high-floor section. Total capacity is 212 riders." should be combined.
 * Done. Thanks for the view. Arsenikk (talk)  09:04, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 16:34, 20 November 2009 (UTC)