Talk:SMS Ägir/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 05:29, 3 May 2013 (UTC)

Comments Just a couple of points to be addressed and she's ready for promotion. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 05:49, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
 * "amidships" is a duplicate link
 * Fixed.
 * no alt text for image (not required)
 * did she have a name when she was a merchant ship?
 * Not that I'm aware of - Gröner usually gives the new name if it was available. It's not in Conway's or any other source I've been able to track down.
 * "240 mm (9.4 in) thick amidships"
 * Fixed.
 * what are "Marine type boilers" and should they be linked to an article?
 * Some kind of naval boiler, I'd guess they were manufactured by one of the Imperial dockyards (such as KWW), but Gröner isn't specific.
 * "The lengthened hull, which improved her hydrodynamic shape, and the improved boilers increased her speed by a full knot..."
 * What's the problem here? It's saying that the longer hull and the improved boilers increased her speed.
 * I thought it would improve the flow of the sentence, but it's not a war winner.
 * this might be an Americanism, but should "through the end of the war" be "through to the end of the war"?
 * Fixed.
 * Thanks PM67, your reviews are always very helpful. Parsecboy (talk) 18:05, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
 * No prob. Promoting. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 01:22, 6 May 2013 (UTC)