Talk:SMS Arcona (1902)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 16:02, 12 December 2012 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this soon. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 16:02, 12 December 2012 (UTC)

Prose has issues.

"Medusa was capable of a top speed of 21.5 knots (39.8 km/h; 24.7 mph)." - Wrong ship.

"She was built by the AG Weser dockyard in Bremen, laid down in early 1900, launched in December 1900, and commissioned into the High Seas Fleet in July 1901. " conflicts with "Arcona was ordered under the contract name "H" and was laid down at the AG Weser shipyard in Bremen in 1901 and launched on 22 April 1902, after which fitting-out work commenced. She was commissioned into the High Seas Fleet on 12 May 1903". Wrong ship again.

Can we get a fix on this before I go further? I'm sure the rest is fine, I checked it once over already, but this is a problem. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 06:40, 19 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Should all be taken care of, thanks for catching these mistakes. Parsecboy (talk) 11:08, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

Other checks seem good, here is the simplified check list.
 * Reliable sources:check
 * Prose: Fixed
 * Neutral: check
 * No edit wars:check
 * Images: check, no concerns.

Looks good. Passed. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 04:08, 21 December 2012 (UTC)