Talk:SMS Blücher/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria) (see here for this contributor's history of GA reviews)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written:
 * Not Yet
 * 1) "starting with Von der Tann, on which construction began in 1907" - This sounds very awkward and should be reworded.
 * 2) More of the naval terms should be linked (waterline, transverse and longitudinal steel frames, tp name a few) to be safe. The average person knows very little about ship design and nautical terminology. I'd recommend going through the article and adding a link to any design elements that the average person doesn't immediately understand.
 * 3) Punctuation in large numbers should be consistent, Commas in all large numbers or none (1,000 or 1000) This is relatively minor but it is noticably inconsistent throughout the article.
 * 4) The external links sections should be at the very bottom of the prose, but with only one link I would question the necessity of it. You could just omit the section or add more links to it if you like, that's your call.
 * 5) It is factually accurate and verifiable:
 * Not Yet
 * 1) "Blücher was considered to be a good sea boat..." By who? This sentence needs a source since it seems to be a subjective claim.
 * 2) It is broad in its coverage:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) It is stable:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) Overall:
 * ''On Hold while a few issues are resolved. -— Ed! (talk) 01:19, 17 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review, Ed. I think I've fixed everything you pointed out. Let me know if the "on which construction" bit is fine now. Parsecboy (talk) 10:30, 17 July 2009 (UTC)
 * It looks just fine, thanks. The article now meets the GA criteria, according to my interpretation of them. Well done! -— Ed! (talk) 14:22, 17 July 2009 (UTC)