Talk:SMS Cormoran (1892)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:06, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:06, 13 December 2013 (UTC)


 * overseas cruiser duty for "overseas duties"?
 * Sure.
 * Consolidate the separate class and type entries into the class entry as Bussard-class unprotected cruiser
 * Good point.
 * There are a bunch of disagreements between the infobox and the design paragraph, which, btw, is really a description.
 * Yeah, that was the infobox from Bussard.
 * Why did the Portuguese cruiser require a tow?
 * Hildebrand et. al. don't say.
 * One m or two in Pomerania?
 * Typo.
 * What's a Bismarck tower?
 * Apparently we have an article on them.
 * I know what Polizei-Soldaten are, but most readers won't. Move the explanation to the first use.
 * Done.
 * Make sure that all of the articles on this class mention that Geier is their sister ship.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:20, 20 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Done. Thanks for the review, Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 15:36, 22 December 2013 (UTC)