Talk:SMS Deutschland (1874)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:10, 15 July 2011 (UTC)

I'll take on this review. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:10, 15 July 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * "Kaiser was rebuilt in the early 1890s" - Did you mean Deutschland?
 * Yup. Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 15 July 2011 (UTC)

Service history

 * "She arrive too late" - She arrived too late
 * "until the summer of 1889, ''
 * Deutschland joined" --> until the summer of 1889, when Deutschland'' joined
 * Can you wikilink "Kaiserliche Marine"?
 * "Following Diederichs's seizure of the Kiautschou Bay concession in November 1897" - Following Diederichs's seizure of Kiautschou Bay in November 1897
 * "light cruisers Gefion Cormoran" - I'm not sure what happened here.
 * Too many times rewording a sentence is what happened there. Should all be sorted out now. Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 15 July 2011 (UTC)

Criterion 2
All set here.

Criterion 3
The article is both broad and comprehensive, so it passes this criterion.

Criterion 4
The article meets the neutrality criterion.

Criterion 5
Edit history checks out; the article is stable.

Criterion 6
Both images check out in terms of copyright data.

Overall comments
Much like Kaiser, this article is very strong, Parsecboy. All that's here to do are a few nitpicks, and I'll pass this at GA. Till then, this one's going on hold. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 08:21, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 11:09, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem. I'm going to pass this article right now. --Starstriker7 - public(talk) 16:33, 15 July 2011 (UTC)