Talk:SMS Don Juan d'Austria (1875)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:40, 27 September 2016 (UTC)

Well constructed, will get back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 00:40, 27 September 2016 (UTC)

Section 1

 * Para 2; Sentence 1; There is comma missing after the word "Krupp" in "....al.) guns manufactured by Krupp".
 * Added
 * Para 3; sentence 1; The word "protection" may be removed because the word "armor" itself means something that was made to protect the body. It need not be followed by protection again.
 * Done.

Section 2

 * Para 2; At the begining of the paragraph, the year was mentioned as 1880. But in the later sentences, it was mentioned that the ship attended the opening ceremony of Barcelona Universal Exposition that took place in 1888. At this instant the year 1888 was not mentioned. So a general reader may understand that the BUE also happened in 1880. So please mention the year in the sentence Barcelona Universal Exposition was put in.
 * Good point - I think that got left out during a rewrite of the sentence.
 * Para 3; sentence 4; De-link "Pola" from its article, which creates a dup link as it was already linked in last sentence of first para in the section.
 * Fixed.

Lead

 * There is comma missing after "1904" in the last but one sentence.
 * I don't think it's necessary there, actually.