Talk:SMS Gneisenau/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk) 09:56, 18 February 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments
MisterBee1966 (talk) 10:11, 18 February 2011 (UTC) yes, sorry! I think that's it MisterBee1966 (talk) 06:19, 19 February 2011 (UTC) Nice article! MisterBee1966 (talk) 11:35, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Franz von Hipper was its first commander. I think this is notable.
 * Kaiser's Cup; a footnaote could help to understand what that was
 * Could you add the crew size to the infobox?
 * All three added. Anything else you think the article needs (or perhaps anything you might have access to)? Parsecboy (talk) 16:38, 18 February 2011 (UTC)
 * she was christioned by Alfred von Schlieffen see Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 211, 212
 * according to Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 211, she was named after cruiser frigate Gneisenau
 * sea trials between 26 March and mid July 1908 in the Baltic Sea, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212
 * officially joined the High Sea Fleet on 12 July, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212
 * she won the Kaiser Cup twice in 08/09 for armored cruisers and in twice again 10/11 for cruiser squadrons (with Scharnhorst). This is a bit unclear in the article, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212
 * Alright, thanks for looking that up. I've added it all to the article. Parsecboy (talk) 00:07, 21 February 2011 (UTC)