Talk:SMS Leipzig (1875)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

This article is in great shape. A few comments/queries: Great job on this. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:47, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
 * SMS is not explained
 * Added a note
 * flush-deck is not explained
 * Added a line
 * in the lead, suggest "the 1813 Battle of Leipzig", as the current order makes it seem as if she was named in 1813.
 * Done
 * suggest linking steam corvette again in the Design section
 * Done
 * more first link to corvette up to two Leipzig-class corvettes
 * Done
 * no penalty for the captain for the grounding?
 * None mentioned, at least
 * suggest "rounding South America Cape Horn"?
 * Cape Horn is but one of three methods to sail from the Pacific to the Atlantic ;) (i.e., Cape Horn would be the Drake Passage - you can bypass Cape Horn by using the Strait of Magellan or the Beagle Channel) HRS doesn't say what exact route was taken, so I left it vague
 * what were the German warships doing in Japan?
 * HRS doesn't say - presumably visiting different ports, showing the flag, etc.
 * 6 officers also should be six
 * I think the MoS says you shouldn't mix words and numerals in the same sentence - see MOS:NUMNOTES
 * KK Herbing? Herbig? Another example as well.
 * Those are two different individuals, believe it or not (and HRS reference both multiple times, so it's highly unlikely to be a typo on their part).
 * OK, does the source give a first name for Herbing?
 * No, unfortunately. I checked the entry on Pfeil too, since he served as that ship's commander after leaving Leipzig, and that was also just the last name.
 * do we have a first name for Hartog?
 * Yes
 * sheled
 * Fixed
 * [Yokohama
 * Fixed
 * into a both? both into a?
 * How about "into both a"?
 * File:SMS Leipzig NH 88765.tif licence needs work, no date of publication. Perhaps the NH licence would be better?
 * I suppose that can't hurt.
 * Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 09:31, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Great. Just that query about Herbing left. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:32, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:55, 1 September 2018 (UTC)