Talk:SMS Leopard/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)

Well constructed, will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Section 1; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and link s in right place.
 * Section 2; para 1; The commissioning date is never mentioned. Is it not available?
 * Not that I've seen anywhere - Conway's just gives the completion date, which is probably not the same. It's probably available in Sieche's book but I haven't been able to get my hands on a copy - there aren't many in the US.
 * Section 2; para 1; Is it necessary to mention the 1875 to Don Juan d'Austria, as it is already linked previously.
 * Good catch, that one had been linked, and apparently I didn't remove all of it when I de-linked it.
 * Section 2; para 3; then-Captain Anton Haus; suggest mentioning that Haus was the Commander of the Navy later, in parenthesis.
 * Good idea
 * Lead; it is mentioned that she was armed with ten 47 mm (1.9 in) guns, but in the prose it was four 47 mm (1.9 in) quick-firing guns and six 47 mm revolver cannon, aren't these two different?
 * Yes, but for the purposes of the lead, it's ok to summarize them that way since they are all 47 mm guns.
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 11:27, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for another review. Parsecboy (talk) 12:57, 28 November 2016 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:01, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:01, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:01, 28 November 2016 (UTC)