Talk:SMS Moltke (1877)/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 02:51, 25 July 2018 (UTC)


 * May as well finish the class (I think?) Courcelles (talk) 02:51, 25 July 2018 (UTC)


 * "converted into a barracks ship, and assigned to the U-boat school in Kiel. In October 1911, Moltke was renamed Acheron and converted to serve as barracks ship for U-boat crews at Kiel" Seems repetative, and we don't need two links to barracks ship and U-Boat in two sentences.
 * Good catch - I rewrote that a couple of times and forgot to take that out.
 * Infobox "Draft	502 m (1,647 ft 0 in)" Obvious typo :)
 * Haha, that's quite a tall ship
 * Need to say somewhere in the body that she was the fourth ship to be completed (based on the lead information)
 * Added
 * "going to the West indies and concluding on 22 March 1895." Capitalise Indies here.
 * Good catch
 * " were on 7 July she met" Where.
 * Fixed
 * "and Germany feared that unrest in the island would threaten Germans, so she was sent to Havana." Should likely be explicit as to what island you're talking about.
 * Good idea
 * "stopping in Dartmouth to celebrate" Dartmouth is a dab link.
 * Fixed
 * The redlink in "heavy storms forced her to stop in Santandar, Spain." lives at Santander, Spain, I think, though I hesitate due to the slightly different spelling.
 * I usually go to articles to copy the title to avoid stuff like that, but every once in a while, I say to myself "nah, I can type that correctly"...and here we are.
 * Nothing but a few nitpicks, really. Courcelles (talk) 03:09, 25 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 12:29, 25 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 15:27, 25 July 2018 (UTC)