Talk:SMS Novara (1913)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:30, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:30, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
 * - any update on this? Parsecboy (talk) 12:01, 26 September 2016 (UTC)


 * No DABs, but lots of duplicate links.
 * Fixed
 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * Link minefield
 * Done
 * The last couple of volumes of Warship cover the Adriatic Campaign in some detail. Any other minor engagements in which Novara was involved? And what about that Sieche book I sent you?
 * I haven't had time to look through Sieche yet - been working on translating some material for the Austro-Hungarian ironclads. I figure one of my next projects is tackling the small cruisers from the 1880s-1900s, and as I'm working through Sieche for that, I'll circle back and add what I can to the cruisers I've already done (along with the Novara class article).
 * pipe had been damaged "were damaged", I think.
 * Good point
 * he continued to direct his ship he "remained in command"
 * I had struggled with wording that when I wrote it, and wasn't really satisfied with what I came up with - I like your idea more. Parsecboy (talk) 11:59, 10 October 2016 (UTC)