Talk:SMS Odin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 12:19, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

I'll get on to this one shortly. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 12:19, 1 May 2013 (UTC) Comments Short but sharp, given the lack of wartime action, but a pleasure to review. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 08:19, 2 May 2013 (UTC)
 * "amidships" is a duplicate link
 * no alt text for image (not required)
 * did she have a name when she was a merchant ship?
 * "where she served in the squadron"
 * " 240 mm (9.4 in) thick amidships"
 * what are "Marine type boilers" and should they be linked to an article?
 * "The lengthened hull, which improved her hydrodynamic shape, and the improved boilers increased her speed by a full knot..."
 * this might be an Americanism, but should "through the end of the war" be "through to the end of the war"?
 * the "Fate" field in the infobox is formatted weirdly.
 * Should all be addressed, and per comments at the Ägir review. Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 18:38, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
 * No worries, promoting. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 02:13, 6 May 2013 (UTC)