Talk:SMS Pommerania/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 16:34, 13 September 2019 (UTC)

Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:34, 13 September 2019 (UTC)


 * She also received four 3.7 cm (1.5 in) Hotchkiss revolver cannon in 1880 British plural form of the word cannon.
 * I don't know that that's specifically British.
 * Damnit, I forgot that cannon could be American too.


 * She left Kiel in mid-June 1871 for the first research trip Maybe link Kiel.
 * Good catch
 * training squadron. The ships were sent to Salonika Was this the official name of the city? Because the Thessaloniki article says that "Salonika" was written with a "c" and not a "k".
 * It's an accepted spelling in English - see Thessaloniki.
 * she proceeded to Wilhelmshaven and then back through the Skagerrak Link Wilhelmshaven.
 * Done
 * and Skagerrak to Bergen, Norway. She then steamed south across Norway was part of the Union Sweden and Norway so maybe pipe it to it?
 * Done
 * She was sold in 1892 to a Hamburg-based company Link Hamburg.
 * Done
 * the ship was operated by the firm Paulsen & Ivers Is there a link to the firm Paulsen & Ivers?
 * No, not that I'm aware of.
 * but was lost with all hands on her first voyage as a merchant ship on 20 January 1894 Remove the "on 20" with "in".
 * Done
 * No edit wars.

Infobox
 * No tonnes?
 * Good catch
 * No length of the long at the waterline?
 * I usually only do the overall length in the box
 * Link knots.
 * Done
 * Maybe add her renamed name in the infobox and the date or isn't that necessary?
 * Added.

Images
 * You have a great picture, hopefully, they'd become an FP. I can imagine that they'd be gorgeous.
 * Unfortunately, it chops off the front of the ship, but it's all I've been able to find.

Sources That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 13:37, 15 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me.
 * No OR.
 * The sources are reliable and academic.
 * Thanks yet again! Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 16 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 17:31, 17 September 2019 (UTC)