Talk:SMS Sachsen (1916)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:45, 10 January 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:45, 10 January 2020 (UTC)
 * No DABs
 * Images appropriately licensed, diagram sourced
 * Picture box caption: Why not just say that Bayern is Sachsen's sister or half-sister, if you want to be more precise?
 * Done
 * In the lede shouldn't but never finished be set off by commas as it's a dependent clause?
 * Yeah
 * discarded the steam engine "exchanged" perhaps?
 * Good idea
 * Link secondary armament, Schichau, battery
 * Done
 * Use broadside rather than beam for the torpedo tubes, easier to explain (link) that term than to explain that this isn't the same as width.
 * Done
 * Link construction number to yard number and add to the infobox
 * Done
 * As a result, work stopped on Sachsen altogether, Doesn't follow from the preceding sentence. A missing word somewhere, I suspect.
 * Actually, the "not" in the preceding sentence shouldn't have been there.
 * diesel engine was converted into four of the Type U 151 submarines A neat trick, but I wonder how a six-cylinder engine could be split between four subs?
 * That's a good question
 * Isn't it, though? "Converted" reads oddly to me, perhaps "divided amongst" or "incorporated into", or some such?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:06, 25 January 2020 (UTC)
 * How does this sound? Parsecboy (talk) 14:58, 25 January 2020 (UTC)
 * That'll work.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:50, 25 January 2020 (UTC)
 * eight main guns, though the remaining pair "and"?
 * Done
 * Which deck is the battery deck?
 * Clarified in the text
 * , after which dismantling began; work lasted until 1923 awkward--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:55, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Reworded. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 15:23, 21 January 2020 (UTC)
 * - anything left to do here? I’d like to get the ball rolling on getting this and Württemberg added to the FT, which requires a new nomination, apparently. Parsecboy (talk) 12:51, 25 January 2020 (UTC)