Talk:SMS Stein/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)


 * To do tonight. Courcelles (talk) 20:50, 23 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Lead " twelve 15 cm (5.9 in) guns" Infobox: 14 × 15 cm (5.9 in) guns.  Prose: "15 cm (5.9 in) 22-caliber"  I'm guessing the text is correct and infobox is wrong.
 * Fixed
 * Range: " 2,380 nautical miles (4,410 km; 2,740 mi) at a speed of 9 knots " Infobox: "	1,940 nmi (3,590 km; 2,230 mi) at 10 knots" On this one, both could be right, but the infobox's number would therefore been uncited.
 * Fixed
 * Draft: "5.2 m (17 ft) forward." in prose, "	6.3 m (20 ft 8 in)" in infobox
 * Fixed
 * Top speed: 13 in prose, 12 in infobox.
 * Fixed
 * "The keel for Stein, the last member of the Bismarck class" The lead says she was five of six?
 * The lead was wrong - funny how many silly mistakes you can make if you're not paying attention, eh?
 * "KAdm Louis" Could likely explain what rank a KAdm is, I think it is a real admiral equivalent?
 * Oh, reading on, I see you explain it on second usage, not first.
 * Whoops, I didn't realize I had missed the first one of those.
 * Well-written genreally, that's all I have to nitpick about. Courcelles (talk) 23:52, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks again, Courcelles! Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * No problem! Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 14:28, 24 July 2018 (UTC)