Talk:SMS Stosch/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:49, 23 July 2018 (UTC)


 * To do tonight. Courcelles (talk) 20:49, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking these on, Courcelles! Parsecboy (talk) 23:08, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Sorry for so many nitpicks on this one. Courcelles (talk) 00:11, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Infobox says "	Sold for scrap, 27 May 1907", while both times in the prose, October is mentioned.
 * Fixed
 * Lead: "Stein was laid down in November 1875, launched in October 1876" Infobox: "Laid down:	1876 Launched:	8 October 1877 Completed:	March 1878"
 * Fixed
 * Same issue of different drafts in prose and infoboxes as the other ship.
 * Fixed
 * Prose and infobox displacement differ by about 100 tons
 * Fixed
 * Same issue with different ranges in prose and infobox, too.
 * Fixed - you'd think with one of these, I'd remember to check the infobox first
 * "She also carried six 37 mm (1.5 in) Hotchkiss revolver cannon." Strikes me that "cannon" should be plural here?
 * You can pluralize cannon both ways
 * Is the link to Corvette (4) meant to be useful in "She was the third member of the Bismarck-class corvette"?
 * Nope, one too many pipes in the template
 * " and reached Batavia in the Dutch East Indies " Batavia is a dab link
 * Good catch
 * "France over Tonkin and Annam that led to" Annam is as well.
 * Fixed
 * "East Asia squadron" Should Squadron be in caps too?
 * Yes
 * "The ships left for an overseas training squadron shortly thereafter" Should squadron here read "cruise" instead?
 * Sometimes, you have to wonder what you were thinking when you type something like that...
 * "While Stosch was in Smyrna, Hollmann and his staff made an official visit to Sultan Abdul Hamid II." Should likely mention what he was Sultan of?
 * Good idea.
 * Not at all - these are mostly things I should have fixed before I nominated the article ;) Thanks again! Parsecboy (talk) 12:26, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Happy to promote these both now. Courcelles (talk) 14:24, 24 July 2018 (UTC)