Talk:SMS Stralsund/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 05:11, 30 December 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * This is awkward: a group of a light cruiser and sixteen British destroyers. Maybe "a group of 16 British..." Perhaps reinforced rather than joined? were joined by the battlecruisers A typo, I presume? 31 May – 1916 As is this: 2 February January 1918,
 * All fixed - mostly the results of rewriting sentences halfway through.
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Country or state of publication in Scheer, Staff and Halpern. And delete the ltd from Cassell in Scheer.
 * All fixed.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

I hope the two of you don't mind me commenting. Based on HRS volume 7 MisterBee1966 (talk) 19:45, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Ernst Gronow, mayor of Stralsund, christened her
 * Not a problem at all - do you have the page number? Parsecboy (talk) 19:51, 30 December 2011 (UTC)