Talk:SMS Viribus Unitis/GA1

GA Review
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1. Well-written:
 * A: Prose - Minor Fail Pass
 * While the prose is generally good, there's a few minor issues with regards to sentence structure. The article could benefit from a light copyedit, mostly to tighten the prose.
 * There are still a few minor issues, but none significant enough to hold it back from GA. I would recommend a thorough copyedit if you wish to take the article further than GA.


 * B: MoS - Pass
 * No issues with MoS.

2: Factually accurate and verifiable:
 * A:References to sources - Pass


 * B: Inline Citations from Reliable sources - Minor Issues Pass
 * What makes Andrew Wilkie (3D Viribus Unitis) reliable?
 * I've got a replacement to that....-- White Shadows It's a wonderful life01:18, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I've removed it from the text.-- White Shadows It's a wonderful life 02:39, 26 July 2010 (UTC)


 * C: No Original Research - Pass
 * Everything looks good here.

3: Broad in its coverage
 * A: Addresses Topic - Pass
 * The topic is well addressed.


 * B: Focused - Minor issues Pass
 * I think the length of the "Characteristics" section could possibly be trimmed down a bit. Personally, I'd scrap the bit about the armoured belt, and combine the deficiency bit with the end of the armaments paragraph. Typically, you only give a very brief overview of the characteristics of the class. The best examples are here and here. Most of the characteristics stuff can be put into the overarching class article,
 * I think that I've fixed that....-- White Shadows It's a wonderful life 02:05, 26 July 2010 (UTC)



4: Neutral - Pass
 * No issues here.

5: Stable - Pass
 * No evidence of edit-warring.

6: Images
 * A: Copyright Statuses - Minor issues
 * File:Vunitis-class.jpg - the copyright can only have expired if we know the date of the actual drawing. Either add the date to the drawing or eliminate the image from the article.
 * File:Vu1912.JPG - same issue. We don't know the dates of the author.
 * I've removed and replaced (the line drawing one) the images in question.-- White Shadows It's a wonderful life 01:39, 26 July 2010 (UTC)


 * B: Relevance and Captions - Pass

Overall: On Hold Pass

Generally, the article's in pretty good shape. I'm giving the text a light copyedit, and there's a few other issues that need to be dealt with before it can pass its GA.
 * All the issues have been dealt with. This article is now GA! Well done! Cam (Chat)(Prof) 01:41, 27 July 2010 (UTC)

Reviewer: Cam (Chat)(Prof) 01:14, 26 July 2010 (UTC)