Talk:SMS Württemberg (1917)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 22:26, 18 January 2020 (UTC)

I will take this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 22:26, 18 January 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * No issues identified

Development

 * additional funds for the Navy: suggest "additional funds for the Kaiserliche Marine (Imperial Navy)". The term is used in the lead but not main body of article.
 * Good idea
 * As work on the last member of the class began: I think it needs to explicitly specify at this point that Württemberg is that last member.
 * Done
 * to take advantage Wilhelm's good mood: should that be "to take advantage of Wilhelm's good mood"?
 * Good catch

Description

 * Inconsistency in text and infobox as to number of 8.8cm guns.
 * Corrected
 * Ditto for the minimum armor thickness for the turrets.
 * Fixed
 * No mention of cruising range in body of article.
 * Added

Construction and cancellation

 * No issues identified

Other stuff
A tidy article with minimal issues. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:34, 25 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Image tags check out OK
 * No dupe or dab links
 * No external links so checks for these not necessary
 * I'm satisfied that this article meets the GA criteria, passing as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 02:07, 27 January 2020 (UTC)