Talk:SS John Mitchell (1906)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:01, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:24, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "1908, John Mitchell ran aground" she ran aground, subject is unambiguous and prevents a third use of the ship name in as many sentences.
 * The lead is heavily biased toward the final journey. It should be an even treatment of the article overall.  I would reduce the detail in the lead about the final voyage and perhaps increase the detail on the other sections, some of which are barely covered.
 * "1,350 hp (1,010 kW) or 1,400 hp (1,000 kW)" no need to relink units, they're already linked.
 * "180 psi" convert.
 * "had an interest in" no need to link.
 * Again, avoid seasons per MOS:SEASON.
 * Could link tug.
 * "entered Lake Superior.[4][10] As' overlinked.
 * "west of Whitefish Point, John" overlinked.
 * "'7 miles per hour (6.1 kn)" km/h conversion?
 * Swayze source, en-dash, not hyphen.
 * All done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 23:32, 30 August 2021 (UTC)