Talk:SS Lac La Belle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:20, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:41, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "between Cleveland, and Lake Superior" no need for comma.
 * "As of 2021, the wreck..." avoid single sentence para, merge that into the previous lead para.
 * "Cleveland, Ohio by" comma after Ohio.
 * "She was launched" last "she" was the sister ship.
 * "her career ... her career..." repetitive.
 * "on Lake Superior, sustaining" overlinked.
 * "from Ontonagon, Michigan for" comma after Michigan.
 * "St Clair River" not St. Clair River like before?
 * "the Detroit Free Press reported" italics.
 * Lee and Swayze refs need an en-dash not a spaced hyphen.
 * Done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 20:29, 12 September 2021 (UTC)