Talk:SS Pere Marquette/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:50, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "and provided service between the ports of Ludington, Michigan, and Manitowoc, Wisconsin," - provided a service or provided services
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:12, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

Railroad car ferry

 * Wikilinked Milwaukee
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:27, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "and had two twelve foot propellers" - please use the convert template on the text highlighted in bold
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:27, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "had a displacement of some 4,050 tons" - same query as above
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:06, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "propellers for its driving force." - to drive it or a phrase along those lines
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:04, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Wikilink compound engine
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:04, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "that produced 2,500 horsepower." - same query as above
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:06, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "It was unique in that it" - The steamship
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:06, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Wikilink Lake Michigan
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:06, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "It made its official maiden voyage from Ludington to Manitowoc" - Manitowoc, Wisconsin
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:06, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "on February 17, 1897." - the year doesn't need to be mentioned; can be either February 17 or the following day or the next day
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:06, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "On February 21, 1897," - same issue as above
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:06, 22 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Any information on when the vessel was retired and/or broken up?
 * ✅ --Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:14, 22 May 2020 (UTC)