Talk:Saab 37 Viggen/GA1

GA Review
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I am failing this article's GA nomination due mainly to referencing issues. Below is a list of the most major problems that should be fixed before this article is renominated.


 * This article is extensively under-referenced.
 * In the "Cockpit" subsection, you say "A detailed schematic diagram of the original cockpit layout may be found in “Control in the Sky” by L.F.E. Coombs. Photographs of the original cockpit may be found at: [16]" Information such as this should be included in "Further reading" and "External links" sections, not in the main body of the text.
 * Format book references properly and consistently. If you are going to use a split style, with short refs in-line and full refs in the references section, do this for all of the book refs.  Also, format all of the short refs the same way, and make sure to include page numbers.
 * Web references must have a title, publisher and access date.
 * Try using cite web.  the_ed 17  18:36, 4 September 2008 (UTC)


 * References that are not in English should be marked as such.
 * There are a lot of short paragraphs. Paragraphs of one or two sentences should be expanded or combined with other paragraphs.

These are just the problems that I saw on a quick run through the article. Before you re-submit the article for GA, make sure to do a complete run through looking for prose and grammar issues. If you have any questions, please let me know on my talk page. Dana boomer (talk) 18:33, 4 September 2008 (UTC)