Talk:Sacerdos Cereris

Strengths and Improvements
The lead does include a clear introductory sentence however it lacks description of the main topic, Sacerdos Cereris. This is mainly due to the absence of any subsections within the page. However the information present throughout the article is relevant to the main topic. The article shows no signs of bias towards any particular position and is overall very neutral. The source provided is reliable however having another source would definitely benefit the articles credibility. The organization of the article could use some improvement. Mainly in the placement of each topic of conversation. For example separating the main point from the sub-points would provide the reader with a more concise and clear article. Perhaps the usage of images and media would also provide an enhanced understanding of the topic Clementine Johnson (talk) 13:52, 13 September 2022 (UTC).