Talk:Sadie Sink/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)

Take a fresh look at some of the paragraphs, which could benefit from variance in sentence length and sometimes sentence starts. Only a few grammar errors. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:56, 27 March 2024 (UTC)


 * @Pamzeis Just making sure: you think you've tackled everything? Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 20:59, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Sorry for not responding earlier, but I believe I've resolved all your comments. Lemme know if there's anything else! Pamzeis (talk) 05:01, 30 March 2024 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * She began acting at age seven in local theater productions, and played the title role in Annie (2012–14) One subject, no comma WP:CINS
 * They would often recreate scenes from High School Musical (2006); and watch Broadway plays and Tony Award performances. Incorrect use of a semicolon
 * Try and vary the starts of sentences: sometimes three sentences in a row start "She" or "Sink"
 * Reflow some paragraphs that feel a little jammed with unrelated content
 * while the Los Angeles Times's Justin Chang found her emotional intensity "impressive", but felt her role was poorly written Drop the comma

Sourcing and spot checks

 * 6: Glamour story lists siblings and contains the "step out of being a kid on screen" quote. ✅
 * 37: IGN comment is correctly reproduced. ✅
 * 45: W story on Sink's return to S3 of Stranger Things. ✅
 * 48 + 49: Sink joining the second half; the first ref mentions the trilogy more. ✅
 * 54: It only fuels Ziggy’s anger at the world and herself, and Sink’s intense performance gets a great deal of volume out of this one note. ✅
 * 57: Looks like this sentence really could stand with only 58, but no issues with the ref if needed elsewhere for this topic. ✅
 * 65: Across nine episodes, which were released in two parts on May 27 and July 1... ✅
 * 68: stars like Millie Bobby Brown and Sadie Sink (the clear standout of the fourth season) remained snubbed one of several acclaim examples ✅
 * 71 as a citebundle of 67–70, instead reviewing
 * 70: While Stranger Things is led by an ensemble of fantastic young talent, Sink comes out as such a clear breakout that the strangest thing of all would be her not getting some serious recognition come award season. ✅
 * 74: Saturn Award nomination. ✅
 * 101: I made the switch almost five years ago after I worked with Woody Harrelson on a movie. He’s a very passionate vegan and his entire family is vegan as well, so by spending time with them, I was able to learn that a vegan lifestyle is totally doable and it’s not as hard as it may seem. ✅
 * 122: Woods Hole win for Dear Zoe. ✅

Earwig flags a few quotes, but nothing of concern.

Images
There are three images, all CC-licensed from various festivals. Encouragement: Alt text of "Refer to caption" probably suffices.