Talk:Sahib Bibi Aur Ghulam/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:05, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * "who also co-star" "who also co-stars"
 * "V. K. Murthy in Andheri and Dhakuria completed the principal photography" "Principal photography took place in Andheri and Dhakuria with cinematographer V. K. Murthy" or "Principal photography took place in Andheri and Dhakuria with director of photography V. K. Murthy"
 * "at the its factory" – reword
 * "an trainee" "a trainee"
 * "he was surprise" "he was surprised"
 * "concentrated on the screenplay writing" "concentrated on writing the screenplay"
 * "he arrived for" "he arrived"
 * "had potential to boost her career" "had the potential to boost her career"
 * Add a comma after "Bibi for Kumari".
 * "consectitive" "consecutive"
 * "with adding" "by adding"
 * Remove the comma after "a new climax".
 * "by both" "from both"
 * "last major contribution for" "last major contribution to"
 * The non-free use rationales for every image look good.
 * Checked most sources; everything is properly cited. Great work on this article!
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:32, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:54, 3 November 2021 (UTC)