Talk:Sahnish Scouts

Everything under "Why does the organization, Sahnish Scouts, exist?".
I want to say that I plan on adding citations and more links to key words in my section!

I just need a little bit of a refresher on how exactly to do so.

Otherwise if there are any issues regarding with what I had wrote, I am more than accepting to any criticism that anybody would like to add!

Thank you! Madchurch (talk) 03:41, 29 November 2022 (UTC)


 * I love what you have written, thank you! Sorry for the late peer review, but I will paste it below:
 * This is a wonderful article you are creating, thank you.
 * Under the History heading, the 's does not need to go after Arikara (two instances). The "in defense" and "in assistance" sentences are a bit unclear to read at first. Under the Mission heading, "The Sahnish Scouts belief" should be "Scout's belief" and the end of the sentence feels out of order in some way... maybe flip represented and looked for around, or find better wording for "looked for." Under the Notable Cases heading, toward the end, there should be a space so it reads 1 pm, and the dates need commas. The inclusion of a background for why the scouts exist is great! The created article does a great job of including brief info on everything the reader should be aware of while learning about the topic.
 * The main thing I noticed is that you might need a lead to briefly summarize everything brought up. The image included is very useful, but the state and country maybe should be included, and the description maybe a bit more detailed. The tone feels appropriate and neutral, excluding a few instances of wordiness. The article is very well-organized. Great job with links. Your sources seem exhaustive enough, varied, very current, appropriate (aside from the Facebook page since it is a primary source, which Wikipedia for some reason does not like). JHolman43 (talk) 20:28, 1 December 2022 (UTC)