Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2000 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 19:16, 23 October 2017 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Wikilink Kim Collins and Velma Bass in the lead
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Background

 * "Saint Kitts and Nevis made its Olympic debut in 1996 sending ten athletes." - better: Saint Kitts and Nevis made their first appearance at the Olympics in 1996, sending ten athletes
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * " Velma Bass previously competed at the 1996 Summer Olympics in the women's 4 × 100 meters relay." - change to partook for variety
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Athletics

 * "This was the second Olympic appearance for both Collins and Bass, both" - comma inbetween the words "Bass" and "both" needs to be replaced with a semi colon
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Collins competed in both the 100 meter and 200 meter." - Collins competed in both the 100 meter and 200 meter dashes
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Collins finished fifth in the semifinals for the 200 meter event, failing to advance to the finals." - Collins placed fifth in the semifinals for the 200 meter event, and thus failed to advance to the finals.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "and eighth in the semi finals for the 200 meter." - 200 meter sprint
 * done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Good work on this so far. You're on the right track for on getting this series of articles into a Good Topic. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:20, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Addressed everything you noted (and fixed a couple other things I noticed). Let me know if you find anything else and I will fix it. I will hit the other articles soon.  Kees08  (Talk)   03:12, 24 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for addressing the issues I raised. Spotted nothing else that needs doing so this article can now be promoted to GA. MWright96 (talk) 05:50, 24 October 2017 (UTC)