Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:27, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 06:26, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * The Daily Mail citation should be removed per DAILYMAIL as it is an banned source
 * Replaced w/ The Telegraph source  Kees08  (Talk)  

Background

 * Wikilink opening to the 2012 Summer Olympics opening ceremony and closing to the 2012 Summer Olympics closing ceremony
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * You use Saint Kitts and Nevis and St. Kitts and Nevis throughout the article. Only one of these should be used for consistency
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Athletics

 * All mentions of"100 m" and its variants need to be spelt as for example "100 metres" in the prose
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "He was disqualified during the semifinals heat." - Is there any information available to state why he was disqualified? Was it a false start?
 * I checked harder this time and still did not find anything. I was even looking for videos of the event to see if I could figure it out. Do you have any source on it by chance?  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "which was not high enough to advance to the next round" - change to which was not fast enough to advance them to the next round
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "and it was announced July 29 that she would not compete" - reword to and it was announced on July 29 that she would not compete
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Wikilink the World Anti-Doping Agency
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "While the drug is not listed as prohibited by the World Anti-Doping Agency, it falls into the category of veterinary medicine and is therefore prohibited." - repition of prohibited
 * Better?  Kees08  (Talk)