Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2020 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Stevie fae Scotland (talk · contribs) 14:38, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

I've added some initial thoughts, will continue the review later tonight or tomorrow. Ping me if you have any questions and I'll get back to you as soon as. Stevie fae Scotland (talk) 15:41, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

That's me finished the review. I'm happy to place on hold for now as this is close to being a GA. Once the points I've outlined above have been actioned, it'll be good to go.

PS- Great work on the article so far. Stevie fae Scotland (talk) 11:35, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for the review.
 * 1a: Regarding whether lowercase 'g' should be used. From what I've seen the majority of articles like this use capital 'G'. Even the main Summer Olympic Games article uses the capital 'G'.
 * 1b: I feel like Covid should be mentioned here since it had a huge effect on the whole competition. If we don't include it the lead will read something like "XXXX competed at the 2020 Summer Olympics in Tokyo. Originally scheduled to take place from 24 July to 9 August 2020, the event was postponed to 23 July to 8 August 2021" or "XXXX competed at the 2020 Summer Olympics in Tokyo which took place in 2021". Some readers may get confused as to why the '2020' Olympics were held in 2021 so the reason should be mentioned. Maybe instead of linking it to COVID-19 pandemic, we can link it to Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on sports
 * 3a: There is not much to write about the aftermath. Maybe when the 2024 Olympics takes place, we can mention whether the athletes that competed in the 2020 Olympics also participated in the 2024.
 * --  EN  - Jungwon  13:30, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
 * @Stevie fae Scotland pinging. --  EN  - Jungwon  01:11, 10 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Hey, my apologies, I've been away the past couple of days so I've not been able to fully respond to you until now. I kinda thought that with the g and the aftermath so that's grand. My thinking with Covid is that when I read this page, I want to find out about SKN at the 2020 Olympics so it's a little odd that the second sentence isn't about that, it juts off into a related subject but not the primary focus of the article. However, I understand what you are saying and when I read the changes you've made to the lead already, I agree that that is the most appropriate place for it.
 * Just noticed there's a misspelled "meter" as well but I'll tweak that and pass the article. Thanks for making the changes and all your work on it. Stevie fae Scotland (talk) 09:12, 10 July 2023 (UTC)