Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:27, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 06:26, 23 October 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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General

 * All mentions of"100 m" and its variants need to be spelt as for example "100 metres" in the prose
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * You use Saint Kitts and Nevis and St. Kitts and Nevis throughout the article. Only one of these should be used for consistency where appropriate
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * All times set by the athletes such as "10.17" need to be changed to "10.17 seconds"
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

National Olympic Committee

 * "St. Kitts and Nevis Olympic Committee (IOC code: SKN) is the National Olympic Committee (NOC) representing Saint Kitts and Nevis." - should be The St. Kitts and Nevis Olympic Committee (IOC code: SKN) is the National Olympic Committee (NOC) representing Saint Kitts and Nevis
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "The executive board consists of the president, secretary general, vice president, assistant secretary general, and four members." -May I add what sort of members are they?
 * Of course!  Kees08  (Talk)  

2000 Summer Olympics

 * " He advanced to the finals in the 100 m sprint and placed seventh," - He advanced to the finals of the 100 metres sprint and placed seventh,
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

2004 Summer Olympics

 * "He finished sixth in the 100 m with a time of 10.00." - Think that ten seconds would be better in this sentence
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

2008 Summer Olympics

 * "Kim Collins competed in two events, was the sole athlete from Saint Kitts and Nevis to advance to the finals" - Kim Collins competed in two event, and was the only athlete from Saint Kitts and Nevis to advance to the finals
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Collins finished 6th place in the 200 m, finishing with a time of 20.59." - Collins finished in sixth place in the 200 metres, with a time of 20.59 seconds
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

2012 Summer Olympics

 * "One athlete, sprinter Tameka Williams, admitted prior to competing that she took Blast Off Red," - This sentence should be reworded to One athlete, the sprinter Tameka Williams, admitted prior to competing in the London Games that she took Blast Off Red,
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)