Talk:Saint Young Men

Refs dump
ANN Right Turn Only vol. 1 import review --KrebMarkt 16:12, 13 June 2010 (UTC)

ja01 ja05

聖 kanji/pronunciation
The beginning of the title is 聖, but romanized as "seinto" - the character literally means saint, and is pronounced "kiyoshi", whereas "seinto" would be in katakana. Is there a source that confirms this as an unorthodox pronunciation? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.240.249.45 (talk) 06:10, 15 January 2011 (UTC)


 * Covers and other publicity material show セイント as rubi. —Quasirandom (talk) 16:42, 15 January 2011 (UTC)

Quick assessments

 * Grammar issues
 * OVA, not OAD. Try to use the same term throughout wiki.
 * Consider splitting the OAD section into an anime section. If the Film has close ties to the "Anime" (Same voice cast and studio), consider subheading it under the anime heading. DragonZero  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 05:33, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

Reference
Also, there's an anime guide available (in Japanese). If anyone can get that, it'd be great (I think). Ryoga (talk) 17:44, 16 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Interview with Nakamura. Shueisha Ryoga (talk) 17:09, 15 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Natalie interview Ryoga (talk) 17:39, 16 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Another one

Quick assessment 2
I was going to review this for GA but there was too much prose issues for me.


 * "While taking a vacation on Earth, they attempt to hide their identities and understand modern Japanese society." Clarity
 * First three sentences for production needs improvement in prose, either due to awkward phrasing or clarity.
 * Second paragraph, second sentence of production has an incomplete idea. I know the third sentence explains the reasoning afterwards, and those two should be merged or rewritten somehow.
 * "influenced by Nakamura's sister," Inspired? I thought the sentence seems awkward.
 * "she wrote without preparation" Clarity
 * "published in the Kodansha's " Extra the
 * Manga, second third sentence. Better to word as something like "hiatus between x and x for pregnancy" or something. Time map is very jarring.
 * localized. Not sure about this and I could be wrong but localized is for location, you probably want translated instead.
 * English license attempt sentences are confusing
 * Cite first sentence, last sentence for second paragraph of anime for better stylization.
 * Syntehsis the reception. Having arbitrary numbers for each year isn't very helpful.
 * Same with film.

DragonZero ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 04:43, 18 May 2015 (UTC)


 * Hm, strange, I haven't seen it before... But thanks for the tips, ! My replies:


 * Clarity on what exactly? They are taking a vacation on Earth, they don't want to be recognized, and they want to understand society
 * I'm not sure what the problem is but I've tried
 * Ditto
 * Well, in the previous sentences it's described how she prepared to write most of the chapters. Then, it's explained that she doesn't have a specific plan for some chapters. I've tried to rewrite...
 * Yeah, far better
 * Done
 * I hope it helps
 * Done
 * Done
 * Done Gabriel Yuji (talk) 19:31, 3 June 2015 (UTC)