Talk:Sajmište concentration camp/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 12:26, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this one shortly. Regards. Comments
 * There are some broken links between the citations and references, eg Ramet 2005 (should be 2006 per the refs) and Vojnovic 2013 (needs a year field in the citation template) that need addressing against criteria 2a.
 * There are a couple of duplicate links "Gruppenfuhrer" and the German language template.
 * There are some issues with not referencing some ranges of figures available in one referenced source and using figures from another. For example, Ramet p. 131 says 40,000 killed, of which 7,000 were Jews, and points to Shelach for discussion about the estimates, but Mojzes (47,000) has been used without mentioning numbers from the other sources. Ranges should be inserted here to avoid the impression that one source is preferred over another.
 * The camp was located in Staro Sajmište, not Novi Beograd, which wasn't built till after the war.
 * The tower photo is actually the tower of the old fairground, is it not? I think the caption should reflect that.
 * in the lead, "a gas van", not "the gas van" there were about 20 of those vans used by the Germans throughout Europe.
 * Shelach 1989, p. 1168–1169. should be Shelach 1989, pp. 1168–1169.
 * All comments have been addressed. 23 editor (talk) 18:38, 4 July 2013 (UTC)


 * fn 20 doesn't point to its source
 * After giving Turner's name in full at first mention, he becomes just "Turner" from then on
 * putting this on hold to get those last couple of things done, then she's good to go. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 12:35, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I think I've fixed the Turner bit (if I understood correctly). Thanks for | this 23 editor (talk) 23:50, 7 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I've tweaked the Salem cite, I know it isn't 100%, but at least it points to the source now. Passed. Well done. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 00:04, 8 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you, 23 editor (talk) 00:41, 8 July 2013 (UTC)