Talk:Salazar v. Ramah Navajo Chapter/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yash! (talk · contribs) 04:51, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

I will start soon. Thanks,  Yash!  04:51, 4 October 2015 (UTC)


 * , please feel free to contact me if there is anything that needs to be improved/corrected/fixed as you complete this GA review. The nominator recently retired, so they likely won't be available to make corrections during the GA review process. I am familiar with this case, and I am well versed in this subject area, so please let me know if you have any questions. Best, -- Notecardforfree (talk) 08:23, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

Lead

 * It is okay to use common links such as Native American in the lead. So, please link "Native American".
 * "This case" -> "The case"
 * Remove "finally".
 * &#x2705; - I edited the lead according to your suggestions, and I also edited the first sentence to clarify the Court's holding. Let me know if you think anything else needs to be changed. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 14:54, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Background

 * Remove the main article template as it is used wrongly (the article is linked in the first sentence and we are talking about the background and not the region).
 * Unlink "Administrative subdivision".
 * Unlink "Navjo Nation" the second time it appears (in "Navjo tribe").
 * "The entire Navajo Nation" -> "The Navajo Nation".
 * Need a period after "enrolled members".
 * Why is "T" inside "" ("[T]he")?
 * &#x2705; - I modified this section according to your suggestions. However, I did not change the Manuelito quotation (beginning with the letter "T" in brackets). I don't have access to this offline source, but I presume the first letter was placed in brackets because it is not capitalized in the source material. If you begin a sentence with a quotation, and the first word of the quoted material does not begin with a capital letter, you should use brackets to change the source material so that you can begin the sentence with a capital letter (see MOS:QUOTE). -- Notecardforfree (talk) 15:10, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Legislative background

 * Remove the main article template.
 * Use some better term than "shortfalls".
 * &#x2705; - I changed the "main article" template to a "see also" template; I think it is useful to keep the "see also" link because the IDEAA provides additional information about a topic that is summarized in this subsection. However, I left the word "shortfall" in the article because it is a term of art in the law that is used to describe a situation when legislative appropriations fail to cover all actual expenses (see the explanation at this article). -- Notecardforfree (talk) 15:26, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Procedural history

 * Link "State of New Mexico", only if 'State of New Mexico' refers to something other than 'New Mexico'.
 * &#x2705; - I added a Wikilink to New Mexico. There was also a territory that preceded the state (see New Mexico Territory), so I think the link is helpful. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 15:39, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

District court on remand

 * "The district court granted summary judgment to the government, and the Chapter appealed." - ref?
 * &#x2705; - I added a citation to the 2011 10th Circuit case. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 15:52, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Circuit court, 2d appeal

 * What does "2d" in this sub-section mean?
 * "The court then noted that when" -> "The court noted that when".
 * &#x2705; - I changed the "2d" notation to "second" (2d is sometimes used as a shorthand abbreviation for the word "second"). I also fixed changed "the court noted ..." per your suggestion. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 15:56, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Supreme Court

 * Link "Supreme Court of the United States".
 * &#x2705; - I added the link per your suggestion. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 15:59, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Ramah Chapter

 * "Carter G. Phillips. Phillips" -> "Carter G. Phillips. He".
 * Shouldn't it be "complete" instead of "completed", in "...United States to perform a service and completed its obligations...".
 * &#x2705; - For your first suggestion, I changed the language to say: "The Ramah Navajo Chapter was represented by Carter G. Phillips, who argued that ...." As for your second suggestion, the word "completed" is correct here because it is referring to the fact that the Chapter already completed its obligations under the contract. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 16:04, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Amicus curiae

 * No references in this section.
 * &#x2705; - I added a citation to the SCOTUSblog case summary, which has a complete list of amicus briefs filed in this case. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 16:09, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Opinion of the Court

 * Shouldn't "court" be "Court"? It is "Court" in the lead.
 * "Justices Scalia, Kennedy, Thomas, and Kagan joined Sotomayor's opinion." - ref?
 * &#x2705; - I changed word "court" (lowercase "C") to "Court" (capital "C"). I also added a citation to the last sentence, per your request. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 16:15, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Dissent

 * "He would have reversed the decision of the Tenth Circuit Court. Roberts was joined by Justices Ginsburg, Breyer, and Alito." - ref?
 * &#x2705; - I added a citation to the opinion, per your request. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 16:22, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Subsequent developments

 * What's the current status? I mean, were they payed? If yes, when? If no, why not?
 * &#x2705; - I updated the section to include information about a 2015 settlement. -- Notecardforfree (talk) 16:36, 15 October 2015 (UTC)