Talk:Salil Ankola/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 11:46, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Will see if I can find any other problem, but otherwise the article is fine. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 11:46, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Karachi is the lead should link to the stadium in which the match was played.
 * Done &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * "from the side after subsequent series'." - Remove '
 * My bad, removed &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * At age 28 --> At the age of 28
 * Placed a comma after 28 &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:09, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * "producing a few Hindi films" is misleading as he was an actor anf not the producer.
 * Done &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * "He made his first-class debut at the age of 20 for Mumbai in 1988–89." - Source needed
 * Done &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * BCCP should link to whatever it refers to
 * I could not find any link whatsoever, it's just a local team like Boar President's XI in India &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * "both would go on to become great cricketers on their own ways" - not needed and possibly POV
 * Rephrased the sentence &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * domestic and overseas tours --> domestic series and overseas tours
 * Done &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * You should tell the series for which Ankola was seleted
 * Which series are you talking about? &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * "Despite being selected in the Test squads on domestic series and overseas tours" - Mention the series.
 * The source doesn't clearly mention which are those series. &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  07:36, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
 * he along with ... Bahutule were trained under Frank Tyson --> he along with ... Bahutule was trained under Frank Tyson
 * Done &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Shortly after the Pakistan ... a daughter and a son. - The source doesn't says anything about Pak series.
 * Done &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  11:46, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
 * In a match that India heavily lost - Either quote heavily lost or use something more encyclopedic.
 * Done &mdash; Vensatry (Ping me)  11:46, 30 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛  Talk Email 11:59, 30 March 2013 (UTC)