Talk:Sally James (presenter)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:08, 16 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Avoid starting every paragraph with "In [year]".
 * Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "she was the music editor, and was a member of" "she was a member and music editor of"
 * I've re-organised the lead slightly, to take the music editor role up into the first para. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Dr No Dr. No
 * "Jo Mercer, woman" "Jo Mercer, a woman"
 * Remove the comma after "converted houses".
 * Remove the comma after "in 1980".
 * Remove the comma after "as children".
 * Amended as per the five points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * With this example, improve the filmography tables.
 * Make the tables sortable.
 * Add "!scope=row" for every film/tv title.
 * Sort each role by last name.
 * Sort titles (The Wind Blew Her Away should sort as Wind Blew Her Away, The)
 * Finally, center references.
 * Done. (Hopefully.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The scope rows need a bit of work. See Francesca Gonshaw as a good example. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:11, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Ah. Hopefully OK now, . Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:26, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * #Discography is largely unsourced.
 * Removed unsourced entries. (After failing to find reliable sources.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * #Bibliography is kinda short so maybe merge it into #Career.
 * Deleted section as book is already mentioned in the body of the article. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Properly cite sources.
 * Added some details, not sure whether more is required. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:11, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for undertaking the review, . Hopefully I've addressed everything above. Let me know about anything else that is needed. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)