Talk:Salt Lake Tabernacle organ/GA1

GA Review
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 * I'd like to mention that this is a really short article in general. Is there really nothing more that can be added to it?
 * The entire "Uses" section is unreferenced, leading readers to believe that it is Original Research (WP:OR). Please reference it accordingly.
 * Remove the fixed width of the first image; there is no need for it to be so big, especially when it overshadows the text.
 * Even though the article is short, the lead still needs to be expanded to better summarize the article's contents.
 * Format the references according to WP:CITE/ES, preferably with cite web.

Gary King ( talk ) 22:24, 26 June 2008 (UTC)


 * 7 days have passed and these issues have not been addressed. This article has therefore been failed. Gary King ( talk ) 21:54, 3 July 2008 (UTC)