Talk:Saluki/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk) 03:13, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

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. . Seems to have been stable for a good long time. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 03:21, 27 February 2011 (UTC) :
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 * (b) . Looks good, image-wise. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 03:21, 27 February 2011 (UTC)



Comments

 * "The Guinness Book of Records lists a Saluki as being the fastest dog, reaching a speed of 68.8 kilometres (42.8 mi) per hour." Yes, but the source cited is from 1996; does that still apply in the newest version of Guinness, or should it be specified that it was in the most recent edition at that time? Wilhelmina Will (talk) 03:26, 27 February 2011 (UTC)
 * I've added that it's the 1996 - I don't have access to the latest edition at the moment (next time I'm at the library I'll have a look and update if its still listed). Miyagawa   (talk)  11:42, 27 February 2011 (UTC)
 * The online version of The Guinness Book of Records only lists the saluki as the oldest breed http://www.guinnessworldrecords.com/records-2000/oldest-dog-breed/. Of interest to me would be, how long a Saluki can keep it's pace? 79.247.181.177 (talk) 20:52, 31 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks; I'm sorry I haven't checked back in a while, but I've been very busy on a number of things. Hopefully I can get this job concluded soon... Wilhelmina Will (talk) 05:06, 6 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Neutrality (some of these might just be nitpicking, but I want to make sure):
 * "Brigadier General Frederick Lance of the 19th Lancers, who, with his adventurous wife, Gladys..." Isn't the "adventurous" part getting a little story-like?
 * "...caused by Howard Carter's spectacular discovery of Tutankhamun’s tomb in late 1922." Yes, it was a spectacular discovery, but that just doesn't sound to me like something an encyclopedia would say. Other than that, and a few fixes I made, it looks pretty good. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 04:06, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks, have fixed both those points. Don't know what I was thinking including those, I should know better! Thanks. Miyagawa   (talk)  12:31, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Well then, I'd say that wraps everything up! This article has passed! Wilhelmina Will (talk) 21:50, 9 March 2011 (UTC)