Talk:Sam Kirk

Daisy's Peer Review
For the introduction, you should use the template Infobox person to show the facts of your artist so that the viewer doesn't have to look for them. You can add specific facts such as date of birth, residence, education, and anything else that you know on the template.

Here's an example: It's best to put the template on the top right corner!

For the biography section, it would be nice to know what company she worked at in the advertising industry. If you can, you should research what Kirk's childhood was like and what kind of work she produced in the advertising industry. It would also be helpful to know how she became queer. Also: "In Kirk's sophomore year of high school, she discovered her use art as a way to communicate her queer identity." Did you mean "use of art"? I'm not sure what you mean by this, and I thought this was a grammar error.

For the artworks section, change the section head to "Artworks" instead of "Artwork." Also, instead of putting "objectives" and "descriptions," it would be nice to put the information in complete sentences since this is an article! You should also find out if the murals are solo murals or group murals. Just add more details if you can!

For the exhibition section, you should separate the exhibitions between "Solo Exhibitions" and "Group Exhibitions." It would also be helpful if you can find the location of these exhibitions.

For the collections section, "Sam Kirk has a permanent collection at the National Museum of Mexican Art." Can you add a hyperlink for the National Museum of Art or specify what location the museum is. Also, add a period at the end of the sentence.

For the bibliography section, it would be nice to put each reference in bullet points so that it would look more organized and it would be easier to see which links are which.

I like the many reliable sources you have so far, and I like how you put the sections in order since the difference between sections is be easy to understand. The content is also neutral, and the information is pretty straightforward. Overall, an excellent base for an article and I hope this article looks excellent after

--Korallu (talk) 00:10, 15 May 2019 (UTC)Korallu

Wiki Education assignment: Latinx Art and Activism
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