Talk:Sam Quek/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bait30 (talk · contribs) 20:27, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I'll be reviewing this within the next week.  Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 20:27, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * Lead looks good to me.

Early life

 * "(then) independent": should probably just be removed. I'm not sure this extra info about the school is useful in an article about Quek. Removing it would also fix a MOS:SEAOFBLUE issue. (3b)
 * Amended. I also removed "in Birkenhead" after "Birkenhead High School". BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:56, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Career

 * "and a few months later": I'm not sure what happened here because this is a new sentence, but it starts lowercase and with a coordinating conjunction. (1a)
 * "In 2020, she was announced...": saying that she was announced makes it seem like it hasn't happened yet, but later on it says she finished as a runner up. Should be reworded to be less confusing. (1a)
 * I've made those amendments. and some other small copyedits to the section. I've also changed the Celebrity Masterchef reference to one that shows she reached the final. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:12, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Personal life

 * seems good to me.

Images

 * Images are relevant and appropriately tagged.
 * For the Quek vs Argentina photo, I would recommend mentioning that Quek is the one on the right. (6b)
 * Amended the caption. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:15, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

I'm done with the prose. I will review the references very soon.  Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 01:10, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Checklist so far

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: