Talk:Samir Nasri/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Utinsh (talk) 22:35, 9 April 2011 (UTC)

Here is the issues I managed to find.


 * Extra-time is linked twice
 * Unlinked the first one I saw. LOL  –J10S   Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Maybe the sentence in which Nasri is revealed as the accused person in the book should have one or two extra references because it's a highly controversial matter.
 * Gotcha.  –J10S   Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)

Done.  –J10S   Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
 * "Nasri returned to the team in June for matches."; An incomplete sentence?
 * Luxembourg linked twice in consecutive sentences.
 * Oops. Done.  –J10S   Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)


 * According to WP:MOS you should try to avoid linking multiple consecutive words like you are doing in here "Lyon goalkeeper Hugo Lloris". Though I really don't know how avoid this happening in this particular example
 * I wiki-linked the first mention of the position in the article and un-linked this mention.  –J10S   Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)


 * His official website is down and link should be removed.
 * Removed.  –J10S   Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)

Here is the issues I managed to find. It is a great article and mostly I'm really clutching at straws so feel free to challenge anything I'm asking from you. Utinsh (talk) 22:37, 9 April 2011 (UTC)