Talk:Sammy Rogers/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 00:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * "were auditioning" "was auditioning" (referring to the entire show; both uses)✅
 * "through out" "throughout"✅
 * "the Sammy" "Sammy" (person; both uses)✅
 * Quotes in the lead need references per WP:QUOTE.✅
 * Overall, every single quote in the article needs to have a reference recited per WP:QUOTE.✅
 * "She was successful and was called back to screen test auditions alongside other cast members Lindsay was then contacted her via telephone to offer her the role" feels like a run-off sentence and "Lindsay was then contacted her via" sounds off.✅
 * "she dealt with dealt with" "she dealt with"✅
 * "in hospital" "in the hospital"✅
 * Add a period after "Dr".✅
 * "Valentines Day" "Valentine's Day"✅
 * "break-up" "break up"✅
 * "night club" "nightclub"✅
 * "the couples first major storyline" "the couple's first major storyline"✅
 * "when Owen awake" "when Owen awakes" or "when Owen is awake"✅
 * "wheel chair" "wheelchair"✅
 * In #Relationship with Owen Daniels, add commas after "He added", "In addition", and "absence".✅
 * Add commas after "Following her return" and "Upon her return".✅
 * "paired the together" doesn't sound right.✅
 * Add a comma after "He added" in #Reception.✅
 * Archive sources, especially from Newspapers.com since a change in the title can result in their links not working.✅
 * Thank you for the review. I will complete the remaining two points later today.Rain the 1 06:58, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
 * I have just finished archiving all sources via the wayback machine.Rain the 1 15:41, 2 April 2021 (UTC)