Talk:Samuel Blais/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:34, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  06:34, 23 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Page number for ref 6 would be great.✅
 * Frédéric Lavoie is the general manager for the Estacades, right?✅
 * Yes, clarified. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Commandeurs" or "Commanders"?
 * Commandeurs. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "the Trois-Rivieres" Doesn't make sense to have "the" here, unless you want to change it to "the Estacades" instead.✅
 * "5'9" convert
 * His draft overall number should also be mentioned in the prose.✅
 * Be consistent with using "Blues's" or "Blues'".✅
 * "lost six games" Lost in six games.✅
 * "the teams Offensive" Missing apostrophe.✅
 * Craig Berube should be linked for context.✅
 * "He recorded his first career professional goal in his AHL debut" The reference says he only recorded two shots on goal in that game.✅
 * Ref 31 has an agency (AP).✅
 * "reasigned"✅
 * Lead can be expanded with his AHL career.✅

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  07:17, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * , I hope I have made the appropriate changes. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:10, 25 May 2020 (UTC)