Talk:Samuel C. Phillips/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 03:17, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

I'll take a gander shortly. Zawed (talk) 03:17, 9 October 2021 (UTC)

This is looking pretty good.
 * Can anything verifiable be added regarding his service in WWII? There is an image of him in a P-51.
 * Um, yes. This might take a few days though. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  08:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I've expanded it as best I could. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  20:50, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Phillips agreed that it was necessary. agreed with who? Or perhaps this should be "believed that it was necessary".


 * ✅ Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  08:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Phillips privately wrote to Mueller commanding that the president; commanding or requesting? Was Phillips higher up the chain relative to Meuller?
 * ✅ Wrong word: should have been "recommending". Hawkeye7   (discuss)  08:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Some dupe links; Apollo Program and Air Force Systems Command, both in the lead; World War II, Saturn V, General
 * ✅ Removed. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  08:40, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Image tags all check out.

That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 07:55, 12 October 2021 (UTC)


 * All points addressed. Hawkeye7   (discuss)
 * That looks all good to me. Passing as GA as I believe that this article meets the relevant criteria. Zawed (talk) 08:48, 14 October 2021 (UTC)