Talk:Samuel Clegg

Unusual tone
This article needs rewriting to remove an archaic writing style.

Examples:

"finding the necessity for some simpler method"

"in an evil hour he joined an engineering establishment" 2406:2D40:73F1:9710:2457:2BD7:7A9C:291A (talk) 09:16, 26 March 2024 (UTC)


 * First example looks ok to me, any suggestions? I've adjusted the second one and added a tag as it's unsourced. Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 10:18, 26 March 2024 (UTC)