Talk:San Francisco Zen Center

Rentwa 18:51, 15 September 2006 (UTC)

GA on hold
Hello. I will be reviewing this article, and I have currently placed it on hold. Here are some things I believe need to be fixed:
 * Per WP:LEAD, the lead for this article should be approximately 3-4 full paragraphs. Also, they need to adequately summarize all the main points of he article.
 * Some of the bigger pictures in the article need to be resized so they are smaller. They are overwhelming the text.
 * References need to be in numerical order. For example, [6][7][1][8][9] should be [1][6][7][8][9].
 * In the second to last paragraph of the History section, the [4] external link should be converted to an in-line citation. The [6] external link in the SFZC today section also needs to be converted.
 * In the Friends of SFZC section, Kannon Do should be unlinked. External links do not belong in the article itself.
 * According to When to use tables, Many times, a list is best left as a list. Some articles include very long lists which might be difficult to edit if they were in table form. Therefore, I would convert the Alumni table into a simple list.
 * External Links should be below Further Reading.

I'm going to assume that when refs are at the end of a paragraph, they cite all the information in the entire paragraph. Therefore, the biggest problems in the article are with MoS, which I have listed above. The hold will last one week, and then I will fail or pass the article. If the article is still being actively edited, I have no problem giving more time to complete these tasks. Thanks. Nikki 311  16:51, 19 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm failing the article as none of the points were addressed. Once these are completed, feel free to renominate. Nikki  311  16:10, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to 1 one external link on San Francisco Zen Center. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080317065918/http://www.zenhospice.org:80/2_hospice_services/hospice-services.htm to http://www.zenhospice.org/2_hospice_services/hospice-services.htm

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