Talk:San Giovanni in Conca, Milan

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for creating this really interesting article on a historic church in Milan! A few suggestions: I'd think about merging some of the subsections, unless you plan to add more content to each of them; for example, the section on Carmelitan church and suppression only has two sentences in it, which perhaps could be included in the following section that'd focus more broadly on "Early modern era" or something along those lines (MOS:OVERSECTION). Also, there are some English-language secondary sources I came across, which you might already be aware of but which might be useful: Bugini, Roberto., Folli, Luisa. Building Stones of Milan and Lombardy: Volume 2: Stones of Lombardy. N.p.: CRC Press, 2023, Turner, Marion. Chaucer: A European Life. United States: Princeton University Press, 2020.. I've also added a source for "Today" section which does not have footnotes. Let me know if you have any questions!

Ppt91   talk   20:03, 27 February 2023 (UTC)