Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 15:59, 4 February 2021 (UTC)

There is no bias towards you despite this review coming directly after my previous one; it is because they are so many Eurovision contest nominees! --K. Peake 15:59, 4 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "at the annual event." → "in the contest."
 * Target to Eurovision Song Contest 2012 should be on "2012 contest" text instead
 * Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2013
 * "This marked their best" → "However, this marked the nation's best"

Background

 * Remove nation's broadcaster introduction, as you have already provided that in the lead
 * "for the grand final." → "for the respective grand finals."
 * "at the contest was" → "in the contest was"

Internal selection

 * Target SMRTV to San Marino RTV on the img text
 * "and the song" → "with the song"
 * Target final to Eurovision Song Contest 2012
 * Target first semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2012
 * "as an Italian pop ballad with hints of dance" → "as a ballad with hints of dance" with the targets, as that is what the source actually says
 * "in the Summer of 2012" → "in August 2012" because that is directly stated by the source
 * "Unlike her previous year's entry," → "Unlike Monetta's entry for the previous year,"
 * "until 15 March" → "until 15 March 2013"
 * "watched online on" → "be watched online on" but the SMRTV and evening parts do not appear to be sourced
 * "in discussing their thoughts" → "to discuss her thoughts"
 * "Roberto Moretti, and the writers" → "Roberto Moretti and the writers"
 * "of "Crisalide (Vola)" was" → "for "Crisalide (Vola)" was"
 * "staged a promotion tour," → "staged a promotional tour,"
 * Melkweg is not mentioned as a club by any of the sources
 * In the source it says "La location è la consueta Melkweg di Amsterdam" Grk1011 (talk) 18:26, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 * "Later that month on 21 April," → "Nine days later,"
 * [17][16] should be put in numerical order

At Eurovision

 * Wikilink chrysalis on the img text per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * Remove wikilink on Sweden
 * Remove "at the time", as those rules are still the same now
 * Mention the draw was in Malmö
 * "into one of the two semi-finals," → "into one of the two semi-finals and which half of the show they would perform in,"
 * "of the event" → "of the contest"
 * [23] should be solely at the end of the para, as it backs up the last two sentences
 * "On 28 March," → "On 28 March 2013,"
 * "where she was seen" → "with her being seen"
 * Wikilink chrysalis

Voting

 * "At the second semi-final," → "In the second semi-final,"
 * "This also marked" → "The placement marked" plus swap this with the previous sentence in the order
 * "consisting of Massimiliano Messieri," → "consisting of Messieri,"
 * "announcing the country's" → "who announced the country's"

Points awarded to San Marino

 * Good

Points awarded by San Marino

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, quite a nice article again! --K. Peake 17:30, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Done, with one comment noted above. Grk1011 (talk) 18:39, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Must have been an issue with google translate there, but don't you still need to cite the parts about streaming online with SMRTV? --K. Peake 18:43, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 * In the cited source it lists viewing options at the bottom, including the following: "Streaming via web sul sito ufficiale smtvsanmarino.sm". Grk1011 (talk) 18:46, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Oh sorry, I must have missed that. ✅ after all of my queries have been resolved! --K. Peake 18:51, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries, I don't know Italian either so I'm also relying on translated pages! Grk1011 (talk) 18:52, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Let's hope your translator is fully accurate then, if not I'm sure someone more familiar with the language will correct the text eventually! --K. Peake 07:15, 5 February 2021 (UTC)