Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2014/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)

A good number of Eurovision articles still pending, so I will take this on shortly! --K. Peake 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "though both entries failed to qualify for the grand final" → "though the entries failed to qualify for either grand final" or something similar
 * "in the first semi-final," → "in the first semi-final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014,"
 * "held four days later, where it" → "that was held four days later, where the nation"

Background

 * Great job on not re-introducing the broadcaster like you did the past few times!
 * "for both 2012 and 2013" → "for 2012 and 2013"
 * "in the previous year's contest." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013." with the wikilink

Internal selection

 * Video is a neat addition!
 * "a month after the conclusion of the 2013 contest" this part is not mentioned by the source
 * This is covered by WP:CALC, similar to how we keep using "x days later". Grk1011 (talk) 15:05, 8 February 2021 (UTC)


 * "On 13 March," → "On 13 March 2014,"
 * Remove target on snippets
 * Target "Maybe" to Maybe (Valentina Monetta song) on the first mention instead
 * Wikilink pre-order
 * Target dance to Dance music
 * "Media outlets suggested that these" → "Media outlets suggested these"
 * "the following day, and that the presence" → "the following day and the presence"
 * "program on 14 March" → "programme on 14 March 2014"
 * Remove comma after "Maybe"
 * "so that the song's meaning could be" → "so that the song could be"
 * "of Monetta's studio album" → "of Monetta's third studio album"
 * Remove excess spacing and the release year of the album in brackets
 * I don't understand this one? Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I meant to put add the release year in brackets. --K. Peake 16:04, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Done. Grk1011 (talk) 17:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)

Promotion

 * "they were shot at" → "the former video was shot at"
 * "staged a promotion tour, appearing on 5 April" → "staged a promotional tour, appearing on 5 April 2014"
 * "staged to serve" → "that was staged to serve"
 * "in the United Kingdom." → "of the United Kingdom."

At Eurovision

 * Change the United Kingdom to the UK because you have already mentioned the country's full name
 * "was held at Copenhagen City Hall" → "was held in Copenhagen" as the source reflects
 * "for the Eurovision Song Contest" → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2014"
 * Img looks good!
 * "she was joined" → "Monetta was joined"
 * "with bluish a fan-like cloth arrangement" → "with a fan-like cloth arrangement" unless [23] mentions bluish, then move it to being the word after a
 * "was by art director" → "was handled by art director"
 * Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2014
 * "San Marino qualified for" → "the nation qualified for"
 * [1] should also be at the end of the above sentence, as it backs that up
 * "In the grand final, held on," → "In the grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, held on,"
 * "marked nation's highest placing" → "marked the nation's highest placing"
 * "both the semi-finals" → "both of the semi-finals"
 * "were also broadcast online" → "was also available online"

Voting

 * "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014." → "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, respectively."
 * "Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013 Michele Perniola." → "Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013, Michele Perniola."

Points awarded to San Marino

 * The second table is incorrectly titled Points awarded by San Marino (Grand final)

Points awarded by San Marino

 * Good

Detailed jury voting results

 * The members are not backed up by [41] and Ghiotti should not have two dashes by her credits

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, but I am going to sleep soon so this won't be a same day pass like your others unfortunately. --K. Peake 21:30, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I have made the requested edits. One question above though. Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)


 * Sorry about the initial confusion before I cleared it up, ✅! --K. Peake 18:00, 8 February 2021 (UTC)